MENTOR: Stacey Lee
MENTEE: Bethany Smith
TITLE: The Sea Wolves
CATEGORY/GENRE: YA Literary Thriller
WORD COUNT: 75,000
PITCH:
17-year-old Anna stirs up trouble in an isolated Pacific Northwest community when she discovers a number of unexplained deaths, including her father’s, are connected to a mysterious pod of orca whales, and local folklore hides a dangerous truth.
EXCERPT:
If I were a mapmaker charting the waters off Washington State, I’d label Skana Island here be dragons and paint serpents in her seas. I figured out a long time ago the world was no longer a mysterious place and all creatures had been catalogued and named, but the thing they don’t teach you in biology is some places still have secrets and some people hide monsters under their skin.
On a rainswept evening in early September, I dodged puddles and sidewalk cracks in search of sustenance. School started back tomorrow, and as was tradition, Mom and I were having takeout for dinner.
I pushed my way into Murphy’s Bait Shop and Diner, flinging off the night in a thousand frigid drops, stomping my feet and blowing life back into my hands. The locals all looked away as if they were embarrassed for me, the outsider who couldn’t handle the gentle beginnings of a northwest fall. I didn’t care. I was already perking up from the diner smells: the sharp tang of coffee, the spice of the stews and soups on Murphy’s winter menu, and that oily scent of grill and griddle I bet the waitresses could never get out of their hair.
“Hi,” I said brightly to Chelsea, the hostess. She blinked at me then reached to straighten her menus.
Everyone shifted slightly at the sound of my voice. The men at the bar hunched over their drinks and families picked carefully at their food, or turned to stare at the big screens broadcasting sports hanging around the room.
11 Comments
Brianne Johnson · January 22, 2014 at 12:19 am
I would love to see the first 50 pages of this…can you e-mail em to me? Thanks!
Carly · January 22, 2014 at 8:35 am
Looks intriguing!
Please send me 100 pages.
Carly
P.S. Literary Agency
@carlywatters
Lana Popovic · January 22, 2014 at 11:25 am
I LOVE the sound of this – I’m a sucker for marine intrigue! Can you send me the full ms, please? lpopovic@zshliterary.com
Pam · January 22, 2014 at 11:36 am
I’d love to take a look at the full too! querypam@forewordliterary.com
Evan Gregory · January 22, 2014 at 12:29 pm
Send text of this pitch, synopsis, and first 50 pages to agent@ethanellenberg.com Put “#PitchWars Request” in the subject line.
Stefanie Lieberman · January 22, 2014 at 2:02 pm
I like the voice and the premise. If you are interested in submitting to me, please send three chapters to submissions(at)janklow(dot)com. Please include my name in the subject line and indicate that this is a Pitch Wars submission in the body of your email.
Sarah LaPolla · January 22, 2014 at 2:47 pm
Ooh, I like this! Please send me the full manuscript at sarah@bradfordlit.com and please put “Pitch Wars: [TITLE] as the subject. Thanks!!
Rachel Ekstrom · January 22, 2014 at 4:24 pm
Would love to see this. Please send the full ms with PITCH WARS-REQUESTED and your book title in the subject line to queries.rachel@irenegoodman.com. Also please include your query in the email–thank you!
Louise Fury · January 22, 2014 at 8:16 pm
I would love to read the full manuscript, please send it to me in a word document with the pitch/query as page 1.
Thanks!
~Louise Fury
Victoria Marini · January 23, 2014 at 10:47 am
I’m super intrigued by this! Can you send this as a .doc or PDF to victoria.gsliterary@gmail.com ? Thank you! Also, best to include “Pitch Wars” in the subject line. Cheers!
Quinlan Lee · January 23, 2014 at 2:27 pm
This thriller definitely intrigued me, and I’d love to read the full. If you’d like to submit please send the complete manuscript to submissions@adamsliterary.com and put my name in the subject line.
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