Manuscript Status: Finished

Mentor Name: Natalka Burian

Mentee Name: Isaac Fitzsimons

Title: TELL ME SOMETHING I DON’T ALREADY KNOW

Category: Young Adult

Genre: LGBTQ Contemporary #ownvoices

Word Count: 88,000 words

Pitch:

Spencer’s a soccer star in training. He’s also transgender, but that doesn’t define him. When he’s benched because of the “F” on his birth certificate, he must choose between the safety of staying stealth and his right to play the beautiful game.

Excerpt:

Spencer was wasting the last Friday of summer vacation talking to his new guidance counselor about bathrooms.

“It’s more than bathrooms,” said his mom. She tugged on the brass handle, but the door to The Oakley School wouldn’t budge. “Here, hold this while I find my phone.” She handed Spencer a stack of papers before rummaging through the black hole she called her purse. Spencer had no idea how she found anything in there. She constantly looked for new ways to stay organized. Her latest obsession was bullet journaling, or BuJo for short.

As Spencer scanned the parking lot, empty except for their Subaru with a #BuJo Life bumper sticker, a ripple of hope washed over him. If they had gotten the day wrong he’d have an entire weekend to not think about his first day of school.

The thought of Monday made sweat pool, clammy and moist, in the armpits of the blue Oxford shirt that Mom had ironed that morning. When he lifted his arms to air them out, a gust of wind snatched the papers from his grasp, scattering pages everywhere.

Spencer ran after them. Part of him thought it was pretty cool, like Harry Potter trying to catch his Hogwarts’ letter. But if he could do magic, he’d use Accio instead of chasing copies of his birth certificate, passport, name change certificate, letters from his doctor, and letters from his therapist across a parking lot.

Being transgender would be much simpler in the wizarding world.

Categories: PW Entries

12 Comments

Brent Taylor · November 2, 2017 at 9:45 pm

I’d love to read more. Please send the full manuscript as a Microsoft Word document to brent(@)triadaus(.)com. Looking forward!

Lauren Spieller · November 2, 2017 at 10:04 pm

This sounds great. Please send your query in the body of an email, along with the full manuscript and a synopsis (both attached). Please also include a link to this entry. You can send your materials to lauren@triadaus.com. I look forward to reading!

~Lauren

Saba Sulaiman · November 2, 2017 at 11:46 pm

Hi Isaac,
This looks great—I’d love to read more! Please send a query, synopsis, and the first 50 pages (Word documents will suffice) to ssulaiman@talcottnotch.net — and don’t forget to mention #PitchWars in your subject line. Thanks—looking forward to my read!
Good luck,
–Saba

Erica Bauman · November 3, 2017 at 8:02 am

Hi Isaac,

This sounds fantastic–I’d love to see more! Please send a query and the full manuscript to ebauman@aevitascreative.com and put “Pitch Wars” in the subject line.

Thanks!

-Erica

Caitie Flum · November 3, 2017 at 9:17 am

This looks great! It I’d love to take a look.

Please send the query in the body of the email + full manuscript as a Word attachment to querycaitie@lizadawson.com with “Pitch Wars request” in the subject.

Jess Dallow · November 3, 2017 at 10:14 am

Hi Isaac,

I’d love to read more! Please send the full manuscript attached in a word doc with your query letter in the body of the email to Jess@Browerliterary.com with #PitchWars and your title in the subject. Looking forward to reading!

Jess

Carrie Pestritto · November 3, 2017 at 10:32 am

I was super intrigued by your pitch and sample and definitely want to read more of this!! Please send me your query and first 100 pages, with the subject “PITCHWARS REQUEST,” to carrie(at)prospectagency(dot)com. Thank you and excited to see more!

Alex Slater · November 3, 2017 at 12:19 pm

Hi Isaac,
This sounds fantastic, and since you worked with Natalka I HAVE to see this. May you please send the full to ASlater@tridentmediagroup.com?
Many thanks,
Alex

Roseanne Wells · November 3, 2017 at 8:19 pm

I’d love to read more! Please use the guidelines on jdlit.com to send 100pp (instead of the normal 20), and include #Pitchwars in the subject line. I can’t wait to dive in!

Roseanne Wells
The Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency

Christa Heschke · November 4, 2017 at 2:35 pm

I’d love to read on! Please send a query, first 50 pages and synopsis to chquery@mcintoshandotis.com and put the title and Pitch Wars request in the subject line.
–Christa Heschke, McIntosh & Otis

Kristy Hunter · November 4, 2017 at 9:43 pm

This sounds great! I’d love to read more. Could you please send the full manuscript as an attachment to kristy.hunter@knightagency.net with your query in the body of the email and “Pitch Wars: TITLE” in the subject line? Thanks!!

Naomi Davis · November 6, 2017 at 10:00 am

Hi! I’m Naomi Davis with Inklings Literary Agency. Can I please see this full manuscript as a Word Doc, with the pitch and any relevant info you would like me to have in the body of the email? Thanks so much!
Naomi@inklingsliterary.com

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