A hand of a young woman gives a heart as a Valentine's Day gift before a red background.

About this item: A 50 pages manuscript critique, including feedback on: Characters, pacing, stakes, hook, voice, and tension.

Donated by …

V6NCGMlKKelly Calabrese

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Kelly Calabrese lives each day as a creative spirit. She began performing in children’s theatre at the age of 7 and takes ongoing acting classes with Sande Shurin in NYC. She studied improv at The People’s Improv Theater (The PIT NYC), performed on their house team, appeared in many comedy sketches, independent short films, and has written her own one woman murder mystery called “Wasn’t Me.”

In addition to acting, Kelly received a BA in Creative Writing from Binghamton University as well as a BA in Psychology. Major life accomplishments include climbing Mount Fuji off-season and scuba diving with sharks in the Caribbean.

Currently, Kelly is a spokesperson for AT&T, and an on-camera host for RealTVfilms.com and Hollyscoop TV. She interviews celebrities while learning how to NOT trip on the red carpet.

STARTING BID: $10

TURNAROUND TIME allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Brenda Drake provide the critique.

Categories: Misc

10 Comments

Kate · July 14, 2015 at 11:17 am

$10

Kimberly Vanderhorst · July 14, 2015 at 11:44 am

$50

Heather Capps · July 14, 2015 at 12:26 pm

$60

Courtney · July 14, 2015 at 4:15 pm

$65

Alejandro g · July 14, 2015 at 5:44 pm

75

    Suzanne · July 15, 2015 at 11:46 am

    $80!

Alejandro g · July 16, 2015 at 2:08 pm

85. Kapow.

Brenda Drake · July 20, 2015 at 11:43 am

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    Alejandro g · July 20, 2015 at 1:16 pm

    Awesome!! Sent.

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