Mentor Name: Eden Plantz
Mentee Name: Susan J. Bickford
Title: FRAMED
Category: Adult
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Word Count: 99,000
Pitch:
A social media darling lands a writing gig that pulls her into Hollywood’s fast lane, unaware her chance encounter with an A-list restaurateur is a strategic move in a treacherous game of blackmail that will lead to love—and murder.
Excerpt:
Callie Burkhardt gave her lens a clockwise twist, framing her quarry tight inside the viewfinder. Her index finger hovered over the shutter release as she considered her subject, the face that barely hinted at the man’s penchant for Hollywood excess. He looked good for someone sliding toward forty.
Ross Dexter, known far and wide as simply “Dex,” gripped the bottom of his designer t-shirt and winked at the female fan in front of him. His biceps flexing, he lifted the garment enough to expose his legendary abs. The low-riding waistband of his jeans sat comfortably on his hips, just below the sharp line of his well-defined obliques, revealing a good measure of golden blond treasure trail.
So much for the man’s very public attempt to transform his reputation. His man-whore moves were too ingrained.
She steadied the telephoto lens, shifting it to cut the fan from the photo.
Click.
The actor’s eyes held a lascivious glint. He threw his head back, too-white teeth flashing as he laughed at the fan’s reaction.
Click. Click.
These would be gold.
The frame went black. Callie peeked over the top of her camera to see a Sundance lanyard resting on a broad chest in a business suit. She lifted her gaze to a tanned face before stopping short at a pair of deep-set hazel eyes lined by thick gold-tipped lashes. He’d be damned attractive if it weren’t for his humorless expression.
“No cameras. Can’t you read the signs?”
Callie bristled and flashed her press credentials. “I have clearance. Salt Lake Trib. Now move.”
4 Comments
Laura Zats · November 4, 2014 at 2:28 pm
I’m intrigued! I’d love to see the first three chapters. Send them in an attachment to laura@redsofaliterary.com with a query in the body of the email.
Saba Sulaiman · November 4, 2014 at 4:22 pm
Hi Susan,
I’d love to read more of this! Please send a full synopsis and the first 50 pages of your manuscript (Word documents will suffice) to ssulaiman@talcottnotch.net — and don’t forget to mention #PitchWars in your subject line. Thanks, and let me know if you have any questions!
Good luck!
–Saba
Margaret Bail · November 5, 2014 at 6:55 pm
Hi Susan – I’m a lurking agent for this event! I’d like to read more of this, so please send the full manuscript to me at margaret@inklingsliterary.com. Be sure to put #pitchwars in the subject line. Also send a query letter and 1-2 pg synopsis.
Thanks!
~Margaret
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