I’m holding a query or first page (your choice) workshop with our wonderful Pitch Wars mentors during the month of July! They’ll critique your work and help you shine up that query or 1st page.
We have 40 spots (if not more) available. All you have to do is sign up for a chance to win one of the spots on the Rafflecopter below. The critique will be posted on my blog, so if you’re squeamish about posting your work, please don’t enter. It’s for any category and genre. Your manuscript doesn’t have to be completed. I’ll draw names on June 27, so be ready to submit your sample for critique immediately after I announce the winners.
Let us know in the comments which critique you’re interested in.
Sign up now!
50 Comments
Heather · June 19, 2014 at 10:51 am
CommentI’m back in the agent hunt after 2 years shopping a previous project. I feel rusty and would love the critique opportunity.
Kristin · June 19, 2014 at 10:53 am
Thank you! I would love a first page crit; you are awesome, as always!
Emily Moore · June 19, 2014 at 11:01 am
If I get picked, may I please have a first page critique? Thanks for this opp!
Ashley Hearn · June 19, 2014 at 11:07 am
If drawn, I would LOVE a first page crit. Thank you for the opportunity 🙂
Kathleen Palm · June 19, 2014 at 11:16 am
Would LOVE a query crit! Thanks!
A. B. Keuser · June 19, 2014 at 11:21 am
I’d love some help with the Query for my YA SF!
Eboni · June 19, 2014 at 11:33 am
Hope you enjoyed your vacay! Thanks for the opportunity to have my query critiqued. 🙂
Alessa · June 19, 2014 at 11:35 am
Would love a query critique. Thanks for the opportunity!
Vanessa Lillie · June 19, 2014 at 11:39 am
Since I’m querying now, I’d be so very happy with either — but preference is to see if my first page is engaging enough. Thanks!
Tiffanie Lynn · June 19, 2014 at 12:08 pm
I’d love a query critique, but a first page workshop would be fine, too.
Thank you for hosting all these remarkable opportunities!
Genevieve · June 19, 2014 at 12:17 pm
I would love to have my query looked over. But also totally open to first page. Thanks so much!
Lindsey Loucks · June 19, 2014 at 12:27 pm
A first page critique would be amazing! Thank you for the opportunity!
Chris V · June 19, 2014 at 12:48 pm
If I’m drawn, I’d love a first page critique. Woo-hoo!
Debbie Dorris · June 19, 2014 at 1:20 pm
I hope your vacation was wonderful! Since I’ve totally revamped my opening, I would love a 1st page critique. Thanks so much for putting this on! 😀
Tiana Smith · June 19, 2014 at 2:47 pm
I’m hoping to get a query critique!
Stanton · June 19, 2014 at 6:08 pm
I’d appreciate a first page critique of my thriller.
Carolyn · June 19, 2014 at 7:32 pm
Thanks so much for the offer. Would love a 1st page critique.
Jessica Parker · June 19, 2014 at 8:09 pm
Thanks for hosting this. I’d love the opportunity for First Page crit, please.
Jess
Anne Lipton · June 19, 2014 at 8:47 pm
I’d be thrilled to win a first page critique for my thriller. Congrats on your book and thanks for sharing the success!
Jo Vraca · June 19, 2014 at 9:41 pm
I would love a first page critique of a WIP I’m coming back to. Thanks for the opportunity!
Jo
Karla · June 19, 2014 at 11:40 pm
sooo exciting! I’d love a 1st pg 🙂
Anna · June 20, 2014 at 7:32 am
I would love a first page critique! Thanks!
Jocelyn Frentz · June 20, 2014 at 10:10 am
I would love a query critique! Thanks for doing this.
Melissa · June 20, 2014 at 11:16 am
So excited that you’re doing this! If chosen, I would love a 1st page critique!
Rebecca Bischoff · June 20, 2014 at 11:55 am
Comment I’d love the first page critique!
Aniko · June 20, 2014 at 3:19 pm
I registered for first page but I’d be more than happy with either. 🙂
Karyne · June 20, 2014 at 3:41 pm
I’d love to have a query critique! Thanks so much for offering this!
Michelle C · June 20, 2014 at 3:58 pm
I’d like a query critique.
London · June 20, 2014 at 6:52 pm
I’m interested in a query critique.
Keith Willis · June 20, 2014 at 9:06 pm
I’d love to get a first page crit. Looking forward to #PitchWars!
Paula · June 21, 2014 at 1:28 am
I would love both, but since I must choose query workshop it is. Thanks
Francesca · June 21, 2014 at 4:40 pm
I would love my query letter critiqued!
Thanks!
(and congrats on your big announcement..woohoo!)
Ann Marjory K · June 22, 2014 at 7:22 am
I’d love a first page critique! Thank you!
(and such awesome news for you! Hurrah!)
Jennifer Hawes · June 22, 2014 at 7:27 am
Congrats on your new book! I would love a first page critique. Thanks!
Jennifer Park · June 22, 2014 at 9:22 am
Thanks so much for this opportunity and congrats on your book! I would love a query critique if I’m selected.
Shana Hammaker · June 22, 2014 at 12:37 pm
I’d love a query critique, please!
Marcelle · June 22, 2014 at 1:29 pm
A query critique would be AMAZING. Thanks for hosting such fabulous opportunities! Can’t wait for PitchWars.
Ann Carpenter · June 22, 2014 at 3:09 pm
First page critique because I have a backstory problem. as in I love it. like I love coffee.
Marlana · June 22, 2014 at 4:07 pm
I’d love feedback on my query for my WIP. Thanks so much for the opportunity. 🙂
Sharon Shadrick · June 23, 2014 at 4:25 am
I would love a query critique. Pick me!
Lynn · June 23, 2014 at 1:40 pm
I’d like a 1st page critique if I get picked 🙂
Carey · June 23, 2014 at 1:50 pm
I’m writing my second MS, but first MG novel. I’d love feedback on the first page! Having the voice down from the first line can make or break the story!
Josh Mason · June 23, 2014 at 3:10 pm
Query please! I am not good at queries.
Jakkie Simpson · June 24, 2014 at 5:27 am
Fantastic stuff, 1st Page Critique please. 🙂
Noelle Pierce · June 24, 2014 at 12:26 pm
This is great! Thank you for everything you do, Brenda!
I’d like a query critique, por favor. Of course, if I get it, I gotta decide which MS…
Noelle Pierce · June 24, 2014 at 12:29 pm
Also, you said any genre/category but I want to make sure erotic romance is included in that (sometimes others forget about that one in the “any” listing).
Colleen Halverson · June 24, 2014 at 8:36 pm
I’m preparing to query my novel soon, so I’d love a query critique. But I would take a first page critique any day! Thank you!
Linh Nguyen-Ng · June 25, 2014 at 8:18 am
I would like a query critique please. 🙂
Bridgid Gallagher · June 25, 2014 at 2:06 pm
Thanks for hosting this! I’m getting ready to query agents for THE FIRST TIME, and I would happily take any/all advice/feedback/help. 🙂
Margaret Telsch-Williams · June 26, 2014 at 10:21 pm
I’d love to get a query critique!!
Comments are closed.