Genre: MG Horror
Word Count: 48,000
Pitch:
Molly Brown soon learns that every item in Mrs Grainger’s shop has a gruesome history. But when her best friend goes missing, she has to uncover the owner’s sinister past before she’s next in line.
Excerpt:
The hands on the large clock in the town square had only just inched past four o’clock, but the small town of Malreward was already swathed in shadows. The air was heavy with that peculiar November perfume, a blend of bonfires, frost and forgotten apples left to rot in the orchard. Low on the horizon, a lone star twinkled in greeting.
As the pavements began to sparkle, the townsfolk wrapped scarves tightly around their necks and hurried home, eager to be settled in front of a roaring fire with the door locked and their hands around a steaming mug of tea. While some towns and cities came alive in the evening, with bright lights, cheery restaurants and glittering theatres, Malreward put up the shutters and left the night to its own devices.
Given its history, it was the sensible thing to do.
Strange and unsettling events happened after dark here. Unearthly cries echoed through the streets. Dark figures flitted past curtained windows. Twigs snapped in the hedgerows without reason.
Sometimes, children disappeared.
When the night stretched out its inky fingers in this little town, only the foolish lingered.
Or those not quite yet old enough to know better.
Ten-year-old Molly Brown was lingering. She shuffled up and down the pavement, kicking imaginary cans while casting a sneaky glance across the street every few seconds. Had Dave Williamson, the town’s policeman, been passing, he would undoubtedly have paused to observe the girl and check to make sure she wasn’t planning anything illegal.
Mr. Boddy lays beside his Jaguar XK convertible in the garage bleeding profusely from a large gash in his head. The door left ajar, the tools on the work bench across the bay scattered. An empty manila envelope is found on the floor of the Jaguar with the words “Photos Do Not Bend” stamped on it.
20 Comments
Brenda Drake · March 18, 2014 at 8:05 am
Answer: Rusty Nayler with the Wrench.
Rena Rossner · March 18, 2014 at 11:40 am
It must have been a wrench!
Rena Rossner · March 18, 2014 at 1:50 pm
Rusty Nayler with a wrench!
Melissa Jeglinski · March 18, 2014 at 2:38 pm
Bidding. Killed with a Hammer by Lady Gray.
Professor Plum · March 18, 2014 at 2:59 pm
Weapon: Garden Shears
Suspect: Miss Scarlett
Christa Heschke (@ChristaHeschke) · March 18, 2014 at 3:12 pm
Wrench. Mrs. Meadow-Brook.
Laurie McLean (aka Mrs. Peacock) · March 18, 2014 at 3:29 pm
Rusty Nayler with a wrench.
The Maid · March 18, 2014 at 5:55 pm
The candlestick. Obviously. :P:P:P (probably not the candlestick.)
Sean McCarthy · March 19, 2014 at 1:17 am
I’d love to see more, and I think it’s Rusty Nayler w/ the wrench?
Pete Knapp · March 19, 2014 at 10:44 am
It has to be the wrench! I’d love to see this.
Pete Knapp
The Park Literary Group
The Butler · March 19, 2014 at 4:21 pm
The Butler slips this pitch on his silver tray and sneaks away.
Jordy · March 19, 2014 at 5:14 pm
The wrench.
Mr. Boddy · March 19, 2014 at 9:48 pm
Braaaaainnnssss…
Lara Perkins · March 19, 2014 at 9:58 pm
I’d love to see this! I’m going with letter opener, even though wrench was a tempting choice, too.
Lara Perkins · March 19, 2014 at 10:16 pm
Ha, okay, now that I checked my rule sheet more carefully, can I change my answer to the wrench? Point is, I’d love to see more. 🙂
Carrie Howland @ecarriehowland · March 19, 2014 at 11:15 pm
Miss Scarlet with the wrench
Laurie McLean (aka Mrs. Peacock) · March 20, 2014 at 12:26 pm
As you can clearly see from the mansion’s security camera, I was in another room entirely at the time of the murder! That’s Mrs. Peacock’s alibi!
Rena Rossner · March 20, 2014 at 1:08 pm
I was found passed out, drunk, in a very uncompromising position…
Sean McCarthy · March 20, 2014 at 1:54 pm
I’ll use my water tight alibi!
Sean McCarthy · March 20, 2014 at 2:55 pm
I’ll double down on my watertight alibi. Now even more tighter and less watery!
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