Genre: Young Adult Contemporary Romance
Word Count: 60,000
Pitch:
Bound by memory-erasing seizures, Juliet swears by her scrapbooks until a fire destroys everything. Now she is left to choose between the life they say she’s always known and the boy she can’t forget.
Excerpt:
Fractured memories. That’s all I have left. They’re like pieces of a puzzle I can’t quite fit together. But sometimes…sometimes things just stick.
“I don’t know how you do it,” he said, straightening his knit cap back on his head. He was lucky our photography teacher never paid attention to anything. Anyone else would have made him take it off, or worse, thrown it in a collection drawer where he’d never see it again.
“Do what?” I asked, looking up from the print I was editing with a red wax marker.
“Capture everything. The light. The emotion on their faces. The feeling that everything in the world is made of magic.”
His words sounded a little fuzzy towards the end. I could tell he was still talking, but my brain wasn’t registering the words.
“Blue,” I said, not quite sure how the color fit into the conversation.
That was enough to get his attention. He stopped rambling and looked over at me. And though I was staring directly into his eyes, I couldn’t focus on anything. The world was getting darker. Black rims ringing the edge of my vision until the peripheral faded out entirely.
“Jules…Juliet…are you…”
I don’t know what he said next because the sound in the room shut off. My hands became cold. My body going completely numb as my legs gave out beneath me. I fell to the floor unable to brace for the impact that never came.
The world shook from the inside out.
8 Comments
Anonymous · September 6, 2013 at 5:56 pm
Please, send query and first 150 to Uwe Stender.
Lana Popovic · September 8, 2013 at 3:24 pm
The Vow meets…that Drew Barrymore/Adam Sandler movie everyone secretly loved. I’d like to buy a house right here.
Anonymous · September 9, 2013 at 5:31 am
I’m buying a hotel! Query + full, please.
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Louise Fury
The Bent Agency
Anonymous · September 9, 2013 at 7:02 pm
Ship plays Send All Requesting Agents to Jail
Carlie Webber · September 9, 2013 at 10:05 pm
I bid a house.
akaterrie · September 10, 2013 at 12:48 am
Hmm, the tension is unbearable! Okay, I’ll offer to buy property so that I might receive the query and first 75 pages.
Thanks!
Terrie
Kimberly VanderHorst · September 11, 2013 at 2:50 pm
Genius concept and you pull it off beautifully in the excerpt! Congrats on all the agent interest – very much deserved!
Sonia Hartl · September 11, 2013 at 8:04 pm
I love, love, love this so much!
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