Auction Item 54: First Chapter Critique by Roselle Kaes

About this item: A first chapter critique. Donated by … Roselle Kaes Website | Twitter Roselle Kaes is passionate about food and her Chinese-Filipino heritage. Inspired by her late great grandfather, she wrote HUNGER as a tribute to him. She completed the manuscript with major revisions and the help of her critique partners. She is a graduate of Humanities and History at York University. When she is not writing, she is embroidering, illustrating, and chasing Read more…

Auction Item 55: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Natasha Raulerson

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by … Natasha Raulerson Website | Twitter I grew up as a tomboy hanging with the guys, getting skinned knees, watching wrestling, playing Spades, and swimming in the South Florida sun. I’m more inclined to wear dresses now than I was then, but I still prefer a good pair of chucks and a comfy pair of jeans. I have a terrible tendency to somehow always spill Read more…

Auction Item 56: Query + 1st Chapter by Natasha Neagle

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by … Natasha Neagle Website | Twitter Natasha graduated with a degree in Biology from Old Dominion University and a Master’s in Education, Curriculum & Instruction from the University of Phoenix. A middle school science teacher by day, she spends her nights coming up with news ways to torment her characters. She lives in Northern Virginia with her husband, two children, two cats, and a dog. Read more…

Auction Item 57: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Jennifer Hawkins

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by … Jennifer Hawkins Website | Twitter Jennifer is a South Carolinian living in Texas. She’s a wife, mother and part-time combat medic to two rowdy boys and a Great Dane. When she isn’t reading or writing stories sprinkled with magic, you can find her sipping sweet tea and daydreaming about football season. Jennifer is a nurse by credentials, but a writer by passion. She’s represented by the Read more…

Auction Item 58: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Marie Meyer

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by …   Donated by … Marie Meyer Website | Twitter I make my home in southern Illinois where I enjoy helping my oldest daughter train for the Special Olympics, making up silly stories with my youngest daughter, and binging on weeks of DVR’d television shows with my husband. I earned my Bachelors of Science in Education and spend my days teaching elementary and middle Read more…

Auction Item 59: First Chapter Critique by Laura Heffernan

About this item: A first chapter critique (up to 10 pages). Donated by … Laura Heffernan Website | Twitter Laura Heffernan is a California-born women’s fiction writer, represented by Michelle Richter at Fuse Literary. One Saturday morning when she was four or five, Laura sat down at the family’s Commodore 64 and typed out her first short story. She’s written both fiction and non-fiction ever since. In her spare time, Laura likes travel, baking, board games, Read more…

Auction Item 60: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Ronni Arno

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by … Ronni Arno Website | Twitter Ronni writes middle-grade and young adult novels, because she thinks kids are cool, and so are the books they read. Her debut, RUBY REINVENTED, publishes with Simon & Schuster/Aladdin in Fall 2015. Her second book publishes with Simon & Schuster/Aladdin in Summer 2016. She’s rep’d by the amazing Sarah Davies of The Greenhouse Literary Agency. She lives on Read more…

Auction Item 61: Query + 1st Chapter by Suzanne van Rooyen

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Donated by … Suzanne van Rooyen Website | Twitter Suzanne is a tattooed storyteller from South Africa. She currently lives in Sweden and is busy making friends with the ghosts of her Viking ancestors. Although she has a Master’s degree in music, Suzanne prefers conjuring strange worlds and creating quirky characters. When she grows up, she wants to be an elf – until then, she spends her Read more…

Auction Item 62: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Sarah Glenn Marsh

About this item: A query and first chapter critique of a MG, YA, or NA. Donated by … Sarah Glenn Marsh Website | Twitter Sarah writes young adult (YA) novels and picture books in Virginia, where she lives with her husband and four rescued greyhounds. When she’s not writing, she can often be found browsing an antique shop, taking an art class, or watching something scary on TV. She loves: roses and lavender, stargazing, red Read more…

Auction Item 63: 1st Chapter Critique by Editor Tara Creel

About this item: A query and first chapter critique. Special Note: Allow time for critique. Discuss time frame for critique with editor. Donated by … Tara Creel, editor Website | Twitter I write books for children. Particularly picture books and middle grade.  I also offer my editorial services for writers.   I review books for The Deseret News. I am also an editor for Month9Books, Tantrum Division. All of that means that I get to read and Read more…