Manuscript Status: Finished
Mentor Name: E.L. Wicker
Mentee Name: Leigh Stanfield
Title: SIGHT OF HAND
Category/Genre: Adult Contemporary Fantasy
Word Count: 81,000
Pitch:
Deaf street magician Nick Hazard goes from struggling performer to suspected terrorist when a job gone spectacularly wrong lands him in Seattle’s City Hall with a ticking bomb. He escapes, but with cops, crooks, and a government agency full of super humans breathing down his neck, Nick will have to use his street smarts and preternatural eyesight to find the real bomber—preferably before the bomber finds him.
Excerpt:
Years ago, if somebody had asked why I’d be running through a farmers market with two pissed off dopeheads on my heels, I would’ve asked if they had the right guy. Yet, there I was. And there they were. My morning had definitely taken a turn for the worst.
Never take the act off the street corner, Nick. I knew the rule. It was my rule, and I had it for a reason. As a street magician, I spent my days practicing sleight-of-hand for pocket change. It was tempting to use those skills for evil—to get flush fast off back-alley card games and lifted wallets. But the kind of people running sketchy poker games on milk crates behind the liquor store weren’t the kind of people who appreciated a little good-natured trickery. After that one guy knifed me in the ribs last summer, I figured I’d learned my lesson.
Apparently not.
Angry faces scowled and flapped their mouths at me as I shoved my way through the crowded market. I couldn’t hear their voices, but their stink-eyes spoke volumes. The people packed themselves into the aisles shoulder-to-shoulder, like sardines. If sardines went to brunch and swore off gluten. I wasn’t one to judge—live and let yogalati, if that made them happy—but I swore I smelled mimosas as I ducked past a woman in leggings and a puffy vest.
5 Comments
Lisa Rodgers · November 3, 2016 at 12:16 pm
I’d love to take a look! Can you send along the query (pasted into the body of the email) and the first 50 pages (attached as a .doc) when you have a moment to querylisa [at] awfulagent [dot] com? Also, please include Pitch Wars and the title in the subject line. Thanks!
Heather Flaherty · November 3, 2016 at 4:45 pm
Would love to see more! Can you send me the full ms + query + 10 pages pasted in the body of the email, with subject line: PITCH WARS + Title. Thank you so much, can’t wait to see!
Laura Zats · November 3, 2016 at 5:00 pm
Hi there! Please send along the first 50 pages plus a query to laura [at] redsofaliterary.com!
Amanda Jain · November 10, 2016 at 4:00 pm
Ninja request! This sounds great. Please send the query, synopsis, and first 50 pages to amanda@inklingsliterary.com. I look forward to reading it!
Andrew Buckley (@abuckley23) · November 10, 2016 at 4:44 pm
We’re intrigued! Please send a query with the first 3 chapters to acquisitions@curiosityquills.com with ‘Pitch Wars’ in the subject line.
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